Wednesday, February 17, 2010

Draft Press Release 3: Cause Promotion

PRESS RELEASE
February 17, 2010
For Immediate Release

Contact Information:
Preston Parker
President and Founder
preston@cvaia.com

Financial Independence can Lead to Greater Happiness
Living correct financial principles leads to greater independence

LOGAN, Utah— Happiness can be gained by achieving financial independence. Increasing one’s passive income and cutting expenses will lead to financial independence.

“Passive income comes through planned investments like real estate or stocks,” said Preston Parker, President and Founder of Cache Valley Area Investors Association (CVAIA). “By increasing passive income, and minimizing expenses people can pursue careers that they really enjoy instead of jobs that make them unhappy.”

CVAIA is committed to helping people gain financial independence. The organization holds meetings every other Thursday in the Cache Camber of Commerce Building (160 N. Main St.) The meetings focus on teaching members financial principles, and networking skills. Everyone is invited to attend and membership is free. “Meetings are intended to be really non-threaten and any question can be asked,” said Parker.

For more information on the movement toward financial independent or the Cache Valley Area Investors Association please contact Cameron Cutler.


Contact Information:
Cameron Cutler
PR Specialist CVAIA
Cell: 543-789-5643
Email: ccutler@cvaia.com

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1 comment:

  1. Looks and sounds very legit! A few typo's to correct:

    ". . . the Cache Camber of Commerce Building (160 N. Main St.) The meetings focus . . ."

    Is the punctuation correct at the end of the address sentence? It might be, but looks off to me.

    “Meetings are intended to be really non-threaten and any question can be asked,”

    Need an '-ing' after non-threaten. Also, is "really" really necessary? ;)

    "For more information on the movement toward financial independent"

    "independence" instead of "independent."

    "please contact Cameron Cutler.


    Contact Information:
    Cameron Cutler"

    The words "contact" and your name are used twice, back to back. Perhaps just combine the two sentences somehow.

    Nice press release!

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